Dance off
“Dance!” the bath and Sargent Bubbles declared. The best fighter was called onto the bubble side. The dental floss was the judge after 27 years of doing the floss. The bathroom was silent. Then all of a sudden the bath did the hype and kicked the fighter down onto his knees of soap. He was done for, the towel had rapped itself round the fighter! The dental floss was cut! By the toothbrush and the tooth paste, its number one enemy. Then the toothpaste clumsily fell! Toothpaste sprayed everywhere! All was quite. Then the bath did the snorkel………By Réaltín.
Hi Réaltín,
Well done on your piece which really made me giggle. It sounds like the bathroom is the place to hang out if you are a household item! You let your imagination run wild this week and it has resulted in an entertaining piece of writing.
Keep up the great work!
Ciara (Team 100)
Wicklow
Hello Réaltín, Wow! I love this 100WC story for it’s great characters and it’s creative use of ordinary bathroom objects, well done. I really liked the way your characters reacted with one another and had enemies; I hope they had friends as well. You set the scene well and made a very visual story that, as an artist, I could really appreciate. Thank you for the fun in this very enjoyable piece.
Thank you! My mom gave me my insporastion!;)