100WC by Ciara

A MYSTERIOUS OLD MAN

 

It was when I was walking home from school I was on the path. I saw a homeless old man. He started to follow me and we passed his house he insisted on me coming in it was pretty small it had a big hill behind it. I went in he said his name was Gerald. As I looked around the place I noticed some stairs and I asked him were did they lead to? He said “Have a look?” There was a door that we walked through. He left and locked the door. Gerald just couldn’t stop laughing…..

 

 

THE END BY CIARA

One thought on “100WC by Ciara

  1. Hello Ciara, your story was a bit of a surprise because I was expecting a happy laughter but your story suggests something more sinister. I don’t think that Gerald is a very nice person. It would be interesting to hear more but by giving the reader only a small snippet it makes them more engaged in the story. Well done.

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