MY BIRTHDAY
It was my birthday and me and my mam were on line looking for a cake. I finally picked a football cake that looked nice. It was green too and it had a football in the middle. We ordered it. It came the next day but it was the wrong colour. It was blue instead of green and it had a goal in it instead of a football. We called up the company that gave us the cake and they said that they had made a mistake. We gave it back and got the right cake. I had a great birthday and all my friends were there too. I got a lot of presents and I was so happy.
The End
By Patrick
PATRICK YOUR STORY WAS SO GOOD