Kidnapped
After a normal day at school Aoife and her friends were coming home on their bicycle. At her estate she went in and from that day she hasn’t been seen. She was last seen wearing a pink coat blowing bubbles. Her next door neighbour said that the day Aoife went missing she heard two men wearing all black saying “Now that we got her fired we can try fire her one.” They were both outside her garden like they didn’t mind anyone hearing them. She also told the police that they had two black sacks in their hand one was empty and one was full. The police found Aoife in an abandoned house after three weeks of looking for her. She was not hurt and she was safe.
The End
Hello Holly. You have done very well to incorporate the prompt words into a mystery story.
I have an odd image in my mind though – a pink, bubble blowing coat. I wonder if you could have split those two ideas. Perhaps ‘She was last seen wearing a pink coat AND blowing bubbles.’ Or ‘At her estate she went in WEARING HER PINK COAT and from that day she hasn’t been seen.’ What do you think?
Jackie (Team 100WC)
New Zealand