The Stranger by Rebecca

The Stranger

Once there was two children out playing in the field. They were playing basketball. When they were going home they bumped into a stranger. He said that we were in luck because he just came back from the shop and had lots of sweets. The children were very foolish and believed him. When they were close to the car the children saw that there were no sweets. They ran as fast as they could. When they got home their friend asked them would they like to play football but they were exhausted. They just sat down.

3 thoughts on “The Stranger by Rebecca

  1. Hi Rebecca,

    I’m so glad that the children managed to run away from the stranger’s car. How scary.
    I hope they learnt their lesson.

    Great writing,

    Melbourne, Australia

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