The Strange Tree by Liam

The Strange Tree

One day there was a little girl called Amy. She was riding her bike down the road but suddenly the bike got out of control. She started tumbling down the steep hill. “AAAAHHHHHHRRRRRRGGGGGG” she screamed. She had bad scrapes and cuts all over her body and her shirt was ripped. She started to walk around. She saw this tree with a bike through it. The bike look very old and rusty. Amy wondered how it got there. She thought maybe fairies put it there. She went back to her bike but it wasn’t there. She thought that maybe the bike that was in the tree was hers. Then she woke up and she realised that she was in a dream the whole time.

THE END

2 thoughts on “The Strange Tree by Liam

  1. I like the way you have merged reality with fantasy and then with a dream. This was a difficult prompt but the way you have approached it has worked really well.
    Keep working on vocabulary – maybe a few more adjectives next time to add to the atmosphere.
    Well done.

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