Dance
This story starts with two girls named Abby and Sophie. They are walking to the shop before Irish Dancing to get a packet of popcorn. When they come out of the shop a couple of minutes later they saw a bike in a tree. They thought how it got in there.
When they arrived at the dance studio they were late and they got in trouble because they forgot the clocks went forward and did not put the clocks forward in the house.
When they got home they turned all the clocks forward an hour and were never late for dancing again.
The End by Sophie
Good story Sophie! I love your start. It gets the reader into the story straight away! That’s a good way of making the way of making Abby and Sophie late forgetting to put their clocks forward.
great work Sophie! I liked your start. it played a movie in my head.
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