First day at school
My name is Eibhlín. Yesterday was my first day and last day at school.
When I got to school, my new teacher took us to our classroom. She was wearing a pretty yellow dress.
One pupil came in late. She was a gorilla!!!!!!
At playtime, she was playing tag with some others. When we went in, she was very hyper. She bumped into one of the support polls and bricks went flying everywhere!
Everybody started running.
My parents came to collect me. They never sent me to that school again.
I missed it.
The End
By Clodagh.
Hello Clodagh,
I’m not surprised that you missed that school. Ours too is very dull by comparison. I’m sure a student gorilla would brighten our learning world!
You obviously know about paragraphs, but remember that they can have more than one sentence in them.
Thanks for sharing,
Jackie (Team 100WC)
New Plymouth
New Zealand
Thanks Jackie! From Clodagh.
Food story clodagh from calum
Thanks Calum! From Clodagh