The Spy Cat by Rían

The Spy Cat

One day a cat ran up a tree to catch a bird. The cat got stuck in the tree. There was a parachute in the tree as well. The cat put on the parachute and cut the branch. The branch fell down. The cat pulled the cord and he landed safely. Two days later the cat got trapped in a rock slide. The cat dug a hole to escape. It reminded me of a time when a rock slide fell on me. There is a mean cat called Master Mean. “Who tried to kill the other cat?” called Mittens. He is gone for now. The End.

One thought on “The Spy Cat by Rían

  1. Hi Rían,
    Excellent story! That is one clever cat that got stuck in the tree- great idea to have it use a parachute. Did Master Mean try to kill the other cat? I’m glad that he managed to escape by digging out. In future, you could try connecting up smaller sentences to make a complex sentence. Keep up the good work.
    Michael (Team 100wc), Coventry, UK

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